发表于 2016-11-24 04:13:17
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Posted 18 November 2016 - 08:32 PM
The English sentence is a bit clunky, you could say it this way, but it's not great to write it this way. 889's suggestion (amended as suggested by lips) says the same thing but in a better sentence.